Allthough it was very frustrating that the player has the same colour as the debris and the blocks.
Also it would be nice if you could move a little bit faster withoud the boost.
If you'd fix those 2 problems it would be a 10/10
It's so strange and funny but scary at the same time, and to top it, it gives you the sad weird feeling because of the music.
Thank you for this video, please if you make more contact me and I'll rate it 5 so it won't get blammed so much :)
well it's not bad for your first, I give it a 5 because giving it a 7 would be too generous compaired to other submissings.
But you did make me enjoy it because dispite the grapics the box thing was really enjoyable.
just make the fps higher (I recommend 24) and as you said, sounds.
get them here : findsounds.com
Also try to make it not loop (find a tutorial to make a stop action script) and a loading bar.
oh and in the discription you shoudln't tell people that it's your first submission, some people just vote 0 for a blam point because they think it'll get banned.
Good luck in the future, I hope to see your next flash!
roosen5
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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars December 25, 2010
awesome game! played it to the end
Allthough it was very frustrating that the player has the same colour as the debris and the blocks.
Also it would be nice if you could move a little bit faster withoud the boost.
If you'd fix those 2 problems it would be a 10/10
Rated 5 / 5 stars December 24, 2010
That was awesome!
It's so strange and funny but scary at the same time, and to top it, it gives you the sad weird feeling because of the music.
Thank you for this video, please if you make more contact me and I'll rate it 5 so it won't get blammed so much :)
Thanks, mate! I'm planning on making loads more of these, so I'll keep you posted! :D
Rated 5 / 5 stars June 14, 2010
best flash ever
The music is really interesting and the story is really shocking, especially the shocknig twist at the end, I really didn't think his wife would've cheat on im with his own brother, :( sad ending but amazing video!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated 3 / 5 stars June 11, 2010
the only good thing was the music
you need to higher the fps, don't make it loop, make a story, don't call it "My first animation"
but I'll give it a 5/5 because I want a protection point :D
Rated 0 / 5 stars June 2, 2010
Wales's get what's coming to 'em
Wales are responsible for 9/11 so they deserve it, my father was an employee in the twin towers and he got cancer
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars June 1, 2010
That was pretty cool!
well it's not bad for your first, I give it a 5 because giving it a 7 would be too generous compaired to other submissings.
But you did make me enjoy it because dispite the grapics the box thing was really enjoyable.
just make the fps higher (I recommend 24) and as you said, sounds.
get them here : findsounds.com
Also try to make it not loop (find a tutorial to make a stop action script) and a loading bar.
oh and in the discription you shoudln't tell people that it's your first submission, some people just vote 0 for a blam point because they think it'll get banned.
Good luck in the future, I hope to see your next flash!
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 30, 2010
just amazing
one of the best pico flashes I've ever seen, I loved how he turned out to become P-Bot
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 24, 2010
absolutly incredible
loved it from the begin to the ending, really well animated.
Rated 5 / 5 stars February 15, 2010
ZOMFG
THATZ WAZ JUZ MOTHZ FUCKZ AWESOME1!!!
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 1, 2010
lol
That are some really sharp pencils there ;) :P